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ThyWizard
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0 posted 2000-11-01 09:46 PM


The quiet waves roll to shore,
playing as it seems.
All things are peaceful,
at night when he dreams.

His typical dreams,
of love and romance.
On shimmering oceans,
his love and he dance.

Driven from slumber,
by house ever quaking.
Barking and screaming,
bones blatantly breaking.

Followed by silence,
a silhouette grave.
To flicker and fade,
simple things to crave.

Doors slam cars start,
headlights fade away.
The house is like a siren,
no longer can he stay.

Ties his shoes through tears of rage,
and stalks out of the door.
Jogging to his place of dreams,
the soothing, empty shore.




" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown


Thy Wizard

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1 posted 2000-11-02 01:12 AM


The title should be in search of a perfect....   Great work by the way.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-11-04 06:28 AM


"Shore Lines"...I am enjoying your words.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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3 posted 2000-11-05 12:59 PM


Great job in writing the poem. I loved everything about it.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 2000-11-05 01:06 AM


Yep - been there, done that. Well done and welcome!

Christopher

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