Dark Poetry #2 |
Free Spirit of Restlessness |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The free spirit of restlessness wanders aimlessly in the night searching beyond dark shadows a wolf panting in the moonlight The billowing heart of the wind covets the passion in the dark drifting wingspan of a raven haunts the night as it embarks Phantom rains sing in the steeple as vampire bats soar until dawn the free spirit of restlessness the flame of moonlight, it is drawn A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A haunting romantic picture you create, and as usual, very beautiful. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Ron..appreciate your kind comments.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW this was good! Keep them coming DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you dark kisses...i will try to keep them coming haa..glad you like.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feeling a little restless tonight myself, Victoria. This is, as always, very beautiful and kind of lifts you up and throws you into the middle of the night. Sandra |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Victoria.. You have truly captured the heart of a restless spirit, here... great job! Sheila |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sandra..i guess you are getting all excited about halloween haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sheila...I am happy you enjoyed. nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~ the flame of moonlight is beautiful..but those bats have got to go...*wink ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Cover your neck..but in your case you better cover everything ha... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haha Victoria~ you made me laugh aloud... you are silly! ~Wynter |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem. A great read. I think i'll cover everything too. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa...yes maybe you should too...just to be on the safe side.. thanks DD ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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