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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Motionless 'Neath the shades of moonlight's aim, Motionless, I lay. Eyes revealing mirrored thrills, Thoughts of yesterday. Scented air reminds me, taunts, Touching memories. Still, I lay, reclaimed by you, Current in your seize. ~Wynter thoughts "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, exactly what I am doing, every night. Another great poem, Wynter. (I love that name, by the way) Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Yes Wynter, another beautifully written poem, you capture feelings so well, sometimes I can actually relive them through these words. You write of such beautiful things, you write with such joy, especially the wynter scenes you paint, you do wonderful work, keep them coming. P.S. no I'm not an angel...yet(working on it) Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra, a name is just a name...it is the heart inside that truly matters,  Thank you.Ron, I am no angel either, especially lately.  I am pleased that you enjoy what I write. That makes the expressing twice as rewarding. Thank youagain and again. ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
As I said in the e-mail, this was simply marvelous!! I loved it, the whole message and topic. The style is wonderful and it just gives me this great vibe at the end. Even though the poem seems to be stating the fact that a figure in your life is reighning over how you feel in some way, I like the feel of the poem in a general sense. Gives me the chills, the thrills, and the.....ok that's it.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you again D_D this makes me laugh every time I read it "I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!"*lol ~Wynter |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha yea. It's a little something I cooked up while being bored in History class. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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