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The Windows of My Past ... For Walter Poe
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The Windows of My Past ... For Walter Poe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"The Windows of My Past" He looks right past me when I'm there And cry to him words of soft mean. Am just a ghostly figure now Afloat in life, that only dreams. I sleep, not in a way of rest, Each morn and night, no different then. An easing of the mind can't come, I'm all but drowned, by him again. With death ahead the only goal, In shadows tread I, darkness looms. The days of youth behind me now, So hardened heart and I, share gloom. I dreamt of how it use to be, A beauty I, with special looks. And now just plain, at least to him, No hands do touch, what he once took. Sorrow fills the emptiness, (Although I gave, he never stole), Of never giving up and yet, No longer warm, this heart lies cold. What pity, mine, of what should be, When time has lost the best of we, ~Wynter Bliss *thank you Walter for the title inspiration [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
such a sad poem, of loved neglected and turned away from. I feel the pain as you miss the touch and recognition of a love. Conveys very well. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes Ron, you saw the neglect that I wrote about, I sort of call it being alone but not alone. Thank you for you reading.  I appreciate it.~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You continue to impress me, each poem is fantastic. This one touched me deeply. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra, my thanks to you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I had to read this again, it is so good. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And so..I must thank you once again ...still smiling  ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You never cease to amaze me. Yet another wonderful poem!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yet another wonderful reply...making me laugh this morning. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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