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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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INSANITY I can't move I can't breathe I can't concentrate I can't think straight The only movement are the drops from my eyes, & I can't even conclude to why. What is wrong with me? What did I do to deserve this? Am I insane? Am I evil? Why is my torture living? How can I get help if I don't even know what I did, or what is wrong? Can someone even help me? Is it possible? Or is it too late? Will I be doomed with this forever? Anxiety Deppression Insanity Should I be across the street? <3 LOVE ELMO |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
very good poem. The insanity of life itself. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Elmo~ Where is this coming from??? I dont know but I do like it. ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
letting some steam off is good and this is a good place to do it.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
You've definitely given a glimpse of insanity, here! Completely chaotic! I love it! Sheila |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Literally speaking.....what's on the other side of the street?  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea thanx every1 i was having a very bad day & i wrote down everything that i was feeling i know its very dark & cold but hey it happens LOVE ELMO <3P.S. Dopey- i live across the street from an insane asylum (the psych center) lol |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
you live across from a asylim?? wow. =) i dont think you should be there hun. *hugs* very good poem very emotional. i think we have all thought like this at times. i know i have. good work. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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