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I'm no angel
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I'm no angel |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You read your good book, Say your prayers. Try to lift me From my despair. You try to show me The light within. You try to save me From my sins. You say I’ll change. Only time will tell. But now I’ll raise some Cain, I’ll raise some hell. I’ll walk the fire Dance in the rain, I’ll drink the poison Until the last drop remains. Heaven knows I’m no angel. You clutch your beads. You’re saving grace. But you have needs, It’s on your face. Let me be your savior. I can heal. Let me be the touch, You want to feel. And you will change, And time will tell. We’ll raise some Cain, We’ll raise some hell, Yes, you will change It’s plain to see It’s in your eyes You’re just like me. Heaven knows, you’re no angel. < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Hmmmmmmm nicely written there, Ron.  A little bit of this, a little bit of that makes for a great poem once again.DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I LOVE this!! The way you wrote it was wonderful, and it painted a beautiful image in my head. Great job. Keep it up P.L.U.R. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! This is terrific! It could be made into a song! Liked the imagery it evoked... take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Two of a kind for sure. Nicely written, differently said, which is always nice to see. easy... jwesley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was a little different for you Ron..so you are no angel? hmmmm and here I was beginning to think... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this, Ron. This states my feeling for "that" man, before he so rudely dumped me. We had such a good time being bad.. Damn! I am so bored with enforced good ... Sandra |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, fantasticly written! No one is an angel really... Just devils in disquise!Take Care! |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Wynter...sorry to disappoint you...never said I was a saint either...lol...At least I'm honest. Sandra...sometimes you have to bend the rules just a little (sometimes a lot) don't make anyone a bad person Lm...perfectly said...we're just human...a little of this...a little of that Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is a great poem i loved it & can relate nice work LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Is anybody an angel? Well besides me of course! but great job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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