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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-31 03:39 PM



Here I come,
Straight from hell,
Ringing dark knight’s death bell,
Taking your souls in my hand,
Flinging them away like a rubber band,
My slithering tongue reaching your core,
Your sanity you shall no longer bear,
I was spawned in heaven,
But my thirst had me driven,
So onto hell I rushed,
Did not know it is you I would crush,
Wrapping myself around your will
Seeing you struggle for freedom as I reel,
Devils orders and I must kill
You waste your moments,
On an empty appeal,
If I must to live,
Your life I must give.

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Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)




[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 10-31-2000).]

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Dark_kisses_Within
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1 posted 2000-10-31 03:53 PM


WOOOHOOOO Now this was EXCELLENT!!!

Great work,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Lil OnE
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2 posted 2000-10-31 04:00 PM


Hey, that was really good!!!! I really liked it!!! That was kinda spooky, but it's all good!! I REALLY LIKED IT!!!!!! great work, xeonox. Keep it up!!!  

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~


Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-10-31 06:55 PM


Twas devishly good. nice write X.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Xeonox
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4 posted 2000-11-01 11:20 AM


It was Halloween and I could not disappoint you or the devil.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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