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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Can you feel me? < !signature-->watching you in the night watching your every move. in the flame of moonlight Can you smell the scent of love? arousing the dark Like a bloodhound i know you crave me only a raven embarks mmmm..with delight craving my flesh as i stalk the night in stockings of black mesh Can you feel my breath? whisper upon your neck across your lips across your mind upon your ear lobe oh sublime Can you taste sweet dew of twilight? upon my lips of wine you reach out for me our shadows entwine I know i can have you walking in the night walking all alone in the flame of moonlight Can you feel my heart beating? beating upon your naked chest beating as your body presses against my breast Can you?.....Can you feel me?.. The way i feel you in the darkness alone Can you tell I want you? before lips of our silhouettes kisses softly.. Adieu A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice one, Victoria, very sensual. Rich and complex. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for reading Sandra..nice to hear from you today hon..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I am new here but your poems are so good.They stay with me long after i am done. I look forward to reading more . Suzanne |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you and welcome Suzanne..I appreciate your nice comments.. looking forward to reading yours..~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Lovely Victoria! One of my favourites Great ending... ~ Tara ~"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful writing...eloquent, gentle... And I agree - the ending is great. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Tara and Severn..nice of you to peek in ..and thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would like too....yes...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi James...nice to hear from you stranger ha..thanks for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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