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Dark Poetry #2

Pleading to Greed

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-10-31 04:36 PM

It was quite silent in the eve,
Children having fun make believe,
Upon one house they knock,
But no one seem to gawk,
They bang the door one more time,
Do you know what followed this rhyme?
Open they became gates of hell,
Children screaming like insane bells,
With a blink of any eye in chains they were linked,
Dragging their lifeless body they advanced
They held each other’s hands and began to chant
This put the devil in an evermore-solid rant
Gazing upon reflection they see what they become
An aged folks with not enough strength to run
With each feeling felt they would blaze
Pleading to the devil appealing their case
So from that day on no child goes to the house
Not even a kid who is a perfect louse.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-31 07:07 PM

cute ending for a haunting poem. like it!

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-11-01 11:21 AM

I wanted to show my peers(you guys) that I am not all about the devil you know.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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