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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142


0 posted 2000-10-31 03:44 AM


i've had too much to drink
i've not enough sleep
i'm sickly reminded of they wink
distended and smashed again
love fights again
too many loves lost
too many left
what in all this means anything
i'm waiting for an answer
he got decapitated, steps from his home
she drank, and took lethal doses
a closet became fire for most
with all this death, and hell around
beauty is usually lost and not found
take to heart and soul what you save
what you couldn't, take to the grave
i'm so tired, remember, feel love
i've had too much to drink, but not enough of you

© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-31 07:54 AM


Know this feeling... you've described it well... take care.

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-31 05:49 PM


Sometimes we need to drown our sorrows. You expressed it well.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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