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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Dont look at me that way For the evil is here to stay Dont look into my eyes Or see the tears I've cried Dont touch my heart at all It has become cold with each call Dont listen for my sound For my mouth has been bound Dont stress over my tears They are part of my years I am me, cant you see I'm telling you this with honesty My heart is lonely and cold So dont be brave nor bold Take me as I am, just me And in time you will see That my untouchable soul is here With each shed of my tear I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A great call, to be taken as you are, yes kid. I take you as you are. and so much more. At first glance I thought my post "just me" had jumped. haha Yes to be excepted as we are, with our friends not trying to ??fix us, just like we are.!!! A great statement kid... Joel.. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I to feel people want me to be something i'm not and i hate it. but what are we to do. we'll great poem i long to read more of you. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
very good work and true words they are.not many will take someone for just who they are |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...another one I missed on the first trip. Great poem with a great message. Enjoyed it....Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well good grief Hardrock this one is olddddddddddd. But thank ya anyways.  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If you are wondering how this poem of yours came up again, I decided to go thru all your poems after i read the "rose" poem. I'm not sure if that is the correct title. I apologize if it isn't. Well, I'm glad with my decision to go thru your poems. Better late than never. beautifully written if i may say. Thanks for sharing "That my untouchable soul is here With each shed of my tear" beautiful lines I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I have to admit, this one made me think. I'm befuddled and lost in your work, what more can I say  Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is a great expression, I'm glad I had the chance to read it. It doesn't matter how cold and lonely we feel there will always be someone there who can, and will, touch our soul. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Take me as I am, just me And in time you will see That my untouchable soul is here With each shed of my tear loved these lines, DKW and the message within ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I really like this one, DkW.. I'm glad it was brought back! (and I hope things are better now! )Sheila |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a great poem with a kick butt message. I hope to see more and more and more of yer work. So do post up more.....or else! hehe.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem was awesome, i absolutely loved it. The point you were trying to get across was bold and well heard. Absolutely wonderful... |
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