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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-11-04 09:28 AM

Apparently I am not letting go yet

working on it, really..

Still you invade my thoughts,
trample my nights of peace-
this is not what I sought.

I wake with a headache,
of twisted dreams remains,
and a sleep of heartache.

Reckless cruelty destroyed
the layers of my love,
while you acted annoyed.

Did I ever know you?
My lover, my artist-
what change has brought us to..

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

1 posted 2000-11-04 11:57 AM

very deep...do we ever really know another? I think we sometimes don't know ourselves completely. we all view our world differently.
From behind my eyes,
I see this world,
From behind my eyes,
I hide in this world.
I watch the stage,
Direct the cast.
I glimpse the future,
And dream of the past.
From behind my eyes,
I tell my truths,
And conceal my lies.
If only you could see this world,
From behind my eyes.

And you may see it different from me...but we all feel in the same ways. love your writing. It feels. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-11-05 12:09 PM

I wake with a headache,
of twisted dreams remains,
and a sleep of heartache.

Cat- I do the same, except for the heartache, mine is loss, like a death but the headaches and the twisted dreams are beginning to scare me besides the fact that they are exhausting me.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

3 posted 2000-11-05 01:26 AM

Yep - see, you're writing my heart from a year ago - not fond memories, but I understand them.

C

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-11-05 01:28 AM

This is all so very sad and all I can say is I hope things clear up soon.

Great poem!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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