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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-10-30 08:25 AM


Thoughts and dreams mix into a
a beautiful pallet to form...
The woman I love...
It seems like Fate finally allowed
me some peace....Or so I thought.
The day came...
The day I had to leave...
I literally watched my love walk
out of my life for only God knows
how long....
I returned home....
Only to wish nothing but to stay with her...

There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path....

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-30 09:44 AM


A beautiful reflection, to return to a love thought lost. Very nice.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-10-30 03:08 PM


Sorry for your loss, well written poem, take care.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-10-30 11:11 PM


Greatly expressive.
Take care.
Sandra

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-10-31 02:50 AM


I've always thought of love as a double edged sword, well done!< !signature-->

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 10-31-2000).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-10-31 01:06 PM


Nicely stated and written.

jwesley

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