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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Thoughts and dreams mix into a a beautiful pallet to form... The woman I love... It seems like Fate finally allowed me some peace....Or so I thought. The day came... The day I had to leave... I literally watched my love walk out of my life for only God knows how long.... I returned home.... Only to wish nothing but to stay with her... There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A beautiful reflection, to return to a love thought lost. Very nice. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sorry for your loss, well written poem, take care. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Greatly expressive. Take care. Sandra |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I've always thought of love as a double edged sword, well done!< !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely stated and written. jwesley |
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