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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
My heart has been deceived by the lies you fed my mind. Yeah, you hid the truth, but you didn't realize that I'd figure it out in time. How long did you think that you could fool me? You know, I'm not as stupid as I may appear to be. I trusted you, and was prepared to give you my heart... you snatched it off of it's platter and ripped it all apart. You, my friend, must have been confused. You must have thought I needed you, I'm not a person you can use. I might be your friend, I'll smile and say "Hi." But that's about it, as unimportant as a fly. So don't say a word, please don't say one thing. I don't need your truth ... or your lies. I'm not sure what I was thinking... daydreaming, I guess. In a couple of days, I'll look back on this and see it as a test. A test of strength, a test of my mind. I can't believe you hid the truth, but I figured it out with time. "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry" ~Lil OnE!~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow... this is so true and sad, but with a good ending coz you know he's not worth your tears. It's hard to pass these tests but it's all worth it in the end! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
and see it as a test. A test of strength, a test of my mind. glad you caught it in time...good for you, now move on to greener pastures. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Sad  But you wrote it well  Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LilOnE, such a strong poem and well written. Thanks for posting it. be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
This must be the day for people to write similar poetry. This appears more like a diary entry, I like this style. Like you, I've given my heart away one too many times. It's like riding a bike though, if you fall off, you get back on and do it again. Good work. Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
wonderfully written...I know just how these things go...keep your head up P.L.U.R. |
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