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bamagirl
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since 2000-10-27
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0 posted 2000-10-27 11:30 AM


Knowing you've been in love before,
but was there ever a love like mine?
Did you know the hand you hold was made for touching you?
Did you know the mouth you see was made for kissing you?
Or the eyes you look into where opened for no reason but to find you?
Did you know the words you hear are from a mind filled with nothing but thoughts of you?
Did you know the heart you feel was made to beat for you?
Did you know the poems I write are expressions of the way you make me feel?
Did you ever know before me,
there was a love this real?



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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-10-27 11:43 AM


A warm welcome to Dark Passions!    I really like this... written ever so well!  Take care!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-10-27 12:25 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions!  And what a lovely first post you have here.  Makes ya just want to snuggle in front of the fireplace with a loved one.

Welcome again,
DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry



Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2000-10-27 12:44 PM


Welcome to Passions!

"...there was a love this real."

How many ever find that?

Christopher

bamagirl
Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20

4 posted 2000-10-27 04:11 PM


Thanks for the comments you guys.  Glad to be here!
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

5 posted 2000-10-27 06:08 PM


welcome bamagirl, nice entry, your heart will show the way to that special someone...i'm sure he'll never know one as real.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-10-27 06:20 PM


Welcome!! Hope he DOES know, if he doesn't find one who does.  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2000-10-27 07:52 PM


Very good first poem, here. Sweet thoughts. I hope you have the one to appreciate you.
Sandra

LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

8 posted 2000-10-27 09:19 PM


Oh.... so sweet!!! But I wonder if there is a "real love" and if it comes , how do you know it's the one???
Welcome to Passions! Hope you'll enjoy your staying!
Take Care!

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


bamagirl
Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20

9 posted 2000-10-30 10:28 AM


Thanks everyone for the warm welcome.  Glad you all liked the poem.  
firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
10 posted 2000-10-30 11:29 AM


Yes indeed, we welcome you. However some still search for a love this true    You will do fine here  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
11 posted 2000-10-31 02:03 AM


I know that you are most welcome here. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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