Dark Poetry #2 |
A Love Like This... |
bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
Knowing you've been in love before, but was there ever a love like mine? Did you know the hand you hold was made for touching you? Did you know the mouth you see was made for kissing you? Or the eyes you look into where opened for no reason but to find you? Did you know the words you hear are from a mind filled with nothing but thoughts of you? Did you know the heart you feel was made to beat for you? Did you know the poems I write are expressions of the way you make me feel? Did you ever know before me, there was a love this real? |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
A warm welcome to Dark Passions! I really like this... written ever so well! Take care! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! And what a lovely first post you have here. Makes ya just want to snuggle in front of the fireplace with a loved one. Welcome again, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Welcome to Passions! "...there was a love this real." How many ever find that? Christopher |
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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
Thanks for the comments you guys. Glad to be here! |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
welcome bamagirl, nice entry, your heart will show the way to that special someone...i'm sure he'll never know one as real. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome!! Hope he DOES know, if he doesn't find one who does. Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very good first poem, here. Sweet thoughts. I hope you have the one to appreciate you. Sandra |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh.... so sweet!!! But I wonder if there is a "real love" and if it comes , how do you know it's the one??? Welcome to Passions! Hope you'll enjoy your staying! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
Thanks everyone for the warm welcome. Glad you all liked the poem. |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Yes indeed, we welcome you. However some still search for a love this true You will do fine here Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I know that you are most welcome here. I look forward to seeing more of your work. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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