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Dark Poetry #2

Abstract Heart

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-30 02:43 PM

A blue mood of,
Scattered pieces.
My Picasso heart jumbles,
Abstract emotions,
Jigsaw in form.
Tangled
Intertwined.
Lines crossing,
Connecting,
Forming a picture.
Love
Lost.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-10-30 03:01 PM

Ron really like the style, nice use of images and well written excellent piece especially the last few lines

Connecting,
Forming a picture.
Love
Lost.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-30 03:19 PM

Thank you Brian, I was staring at a picture I had painted, abstract, shades of blue in feminime form. Got my brain going.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-10-30 10:14 PM

I enjoyed your poem very much.It jumps out at you. Makes you stop and think .I like that. Suzanne

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-10-30 11:17 PM

A Picasso heart, I like the way that sounds. One of my favorite paintings is "Blue Nude".
Digressing here, but this reminded me of that painting.
Very nice flow and feel to this, Ron.
Sandra

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

5 posted 2000-10-30 11:20 PM

Wow, Ron..
You've done an excellent piece, here! I love the words and rhythm you use to tie your concept together.. Great stuff!

Sheila

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