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Contemplate? |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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To contemplate ones own fate is a matter of great concern It makes you ask questions from deep within that burn That place where need hungers and yearns for a life of another kind to live the surreal in our mind To contemplate ones future "could be" folly that is for sure?? We cannot see our tomorrow to fix our gaze at all pure We can set out plans then embark upon execution We boast about them with great elocution Only to find we truly have fate to trust for we are all but dust To contemplate your past as if we could change one stroke of time that's been cast We stay in regrets sorrows that pain Contemplating changing the past never offers us gain So what is life to contemplate for TODAY? Maybe it could be to just walk the right way For all we have of tomorrow is borrowed time If we contemplate how to use it well maybe life will turn out sublime? [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey! Nice to see you  LOl...glad it worked... Cool thoughts here... For all we have of tomorrow is borrowed time yup - that is true...  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great thoughts here, all I can say is to make the most of EVERY day live today as though it is your last. Make the legends, make the myths, you have to work at making life worthwhile.... Same thing really!! Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very true words here. Great expression. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A positive ending. Great work. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Severn....Yes I finally got it work after trial and error! Found out the reason I could not see the upload...was sooooo simple. One of my duh moments! Thanks for all of your help, could not of done it without you. Isis.....Once again....words of wisdom spoken! Thanks! catalinamoon......words of truth that are sometimes so hard to find or swallow! Thanks! Ron K. Fox.....nice to have positive endings isn't it! Thanks! [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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