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Dark Poetry #2

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Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

0 posted 2000-10-28 10:53 PM

Womb
Dark and inviting
A flash of light
A gasp for air
Visions
Life
Death
Visions
A gasp for air
A flash of light
Dark and inviting
Tomb

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-10-29 12:02 PM

Sounds like my life!

Very depressing poem tho... things go by too quickly

DkW

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2000-10-29 01:09 AM

From womb to tomb, short and powerful.I like this alot, well done!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

3 posted 2000-10-29 01:40 AM

Life summed up so short. Sad to think about.

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

4 posted 2000-10-29 10:46 AM

Very...very cool! This says it all just the way it truly is, with so little words! I thought you did an excellent job of showing the cycle of life and death! PERFECT!

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