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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Just a little experimenting...maybe get some inspiration going Like a knight lost in the darkness of night. I swore I'd wear my pride as a sword. A baron barren of his wealth. her locks of hair locked in my memory. But these weeks without her has made me weak. She was gone in her long flowing gown. Leaving as leaves blow in the wind. My heart has now become hard. A weight that can wait no longer. In the morning I will be mourning again. I'm in a daze as the days go by. I hope sleep slips upon me soon. [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Olde worlde darkness for me there is nothing finer  Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice secenry. I enjoyed this one quite a bit.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Loved this Especially the last line.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great, Ron. I could step right into this, the vision was so clear. I adore anything old world.If any woman was made to live with a knight, it is I. (darn time machine..) Sandra |
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