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One Perfect Moment
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One Perfect Moment |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
He was standing alone in the street, Surrounded by a cloud of blue smoke, Behind him the sky was a cold and silent gray, The wind was gently moving the hair from his face, I was watching the way his eyes changed, For the first time I saw who he really was, Everything he tired to be melted into nothingness, In one perfect moment my heart broke again, He was perfect he was so much more, Then he looked at me and it became real again, I was losing him for good this time, In one perfect moment I watched him slip away "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awww.... this is wonderful!  As I was reading, I really saw him standing there Take care!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
I like this. You made me feel the heart break as if it were my own. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
genious! this created such a clear picture of him in my mind... i felt as if i was truly there! great work! |
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