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Dark Poetry #2

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-10-26 07:12 PM

This poem is written as part of my epic poem. so plz enjoy.

  I've lived many years and seen all
             The sorts
   Traveled around the world from
            Port to port
    Faught on many battle fields
    Where the bravest of men have
                Died
     And a dying warrior am I...
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I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

[This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 10-26-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-10-26 07:18 PM

I did enjoy!!! Some of that olde worlde charm. You might want to correct the spelling of warrior though!!

Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-10-28 09:28 AM

Thanks Isis for your reply. just wait till i get the whole book of my epic poems published

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

3 posted 2000-10-29 01:57 AM

Leaves me wanting more! "And a dying warrior am I" So many scenarios playing through my head right now. I enjoyed this.

Much love all,
Krissie

~*Those words...
Oh, how I long to hear
...those words
Tell me...*~

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

4 posted 2000-10-29 01:19 PM

I think I'm going to have to invest in that book! great as usual

P.L.U.R.

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