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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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You offered me a fantasy such love I would receive you offered hope in pretty words oh how you did deceive. I offered you ten thousand stars to wrap you in my glow I offered you the fullest moon and all you said was no. Today I ponder these results and still I wonder why your love was so ephemeral you coldly said goodbye. It seems I'm nothing to your heart though mine still beats for you I know I have to let you go but God, it's hard to do... |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I offered you ten thousand stars to wrap you in my glow its hard when you give all...and recieve so little. Ron |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Sandra..loved it hon..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Once again, your words have moved me. Are you a Scorpio like me? I am trying to find a reason that your words so perfectly describe my feelings. .beth |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
aww...this is sooo good....i feel your pain i do...usually when you have doubts..hes not worth your pain...what a loss for him..you're great! love the work hun! Misery Divine~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Sandra... this is such a heartfelt one... take care ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Sandra... I'm so sorry...  This is so beautifully done, I just love it. I'm so impressed with your writing, it gives me so much inspiration! Take care, I hope all works out for the best! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It is hard to do isn't it Sandra? Exorcise the demons, the bad feelings and memories, but save and cherish the beautiful ones (the ones from before it all went bad). They are still a gift to be treasured always. *hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It seems I'm nothing to your heart though mine still beats for you I know I have to let you go but God, it's hard to do... Yeah! I know this type of feeling......take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I know I have to let you go but God, it's hard to do... ------- ------- Those last lines say it so perfectly. Beautifully said. Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
WONDERFUL!!!!! Doesn't it suck when you want to give your all....long to give it, and it is refused? I cannot not understand that for the life of me. You did an excellent job of conveying what that is like. Thanks for the read, I enjoyed it alot! |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
wonderful...you really have a great ability to express all the pains we all go through. P.L.U.R. |
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