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Dee
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since 2000-08-19
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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-10-27 02:52 AM


Go ahead
I've packed my emotional baggage,
stored it
with the dust
under the bed.
When you're no longer here
I'll pull it out...
examine it
determine where I went wrong.
Once I've assigned fault,
decided where to lay blame
I know I'll be alright.
I'll survive
on my own.


© Copyright 2000 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-10-27 05:21 AM


Hi Dee, I can relate to this one. I like the idea of packing it all away to deal with another day. It's good to see your work again, take care!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-10-27 08:36 AM


Yes, pack it up, hide it under the bed, and try to move on. Thats right where I am. He keeps creeping back out though..I have to kick harder..LOL
Good writing Dee. Take care.
Sandra

bamagirl
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since 2000-10-27
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3 posted 2000-10-27 11:24 AM


Reminds me of Scarlet O'Hara and that famous quote "... I'll not think about that today; I'll worry about that tomorrow."  
Great poem.

Dee
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Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2000-10-27 04:32 PM


Thanks for your comments guys. I think sometimes it's better to deal with it later, when you're ready for it.
Dee

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

5 posted 2000-10-27 06:00 PM


sometimes its best to scatter the seeds and let them bloom where they may. then you can weed in between.
Isis
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6 posted 2000-10-27 06:47 PM


Good advice, BUT you must go back and do the exam and sort it all out, if you don't it WILL stay with you always.....
Great stuff Dee  
Isis< !signature-->

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change.  Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Sp


[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 10-27-2000).]

Dee
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Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2000-10-29 05:00 PM


Ron, sometimes it's hard to know which are the plants and which are the weeds.
Isis, I know exactly what you mean. The exam will eventually be done!
Dee

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