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Dark Poetry #2

Dagger's doom

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-10-26 07:08 PM

      Silver moon
reflecting on this blood
     Stained soil
Now I cease to boil
     Slowly uncoil
Dead bones have no use
       For oil
  Cause i was met with
   The dagger's doom
   All things getting
     Hazy in my
       Gloom.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-10-26 07:13 PM

I so enjoyed this one, gloom shared and written by a master. Great work
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-26 08:24 PM

A very graphic demise. like it.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-10-27 01:28 AM

Nice dark touch to it. I like it.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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