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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Curtain of Shameless embraces you in, You bathe in the sea of sorrow, Cleansing yourself once more with reality, Drying yourself with the towel of truth, Apathy collecting at your feet, Soiling your once rejoiced heart. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
WOAH! Terrific!  Love your word usage... captured a lot... expressed so well. I was going to state which line I liked best... but, um, I can't decide, because they're all very sharp ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this was just a wonderful metaphor. it was short, but every word was pertinent. very nice. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a few words to capture the whole picture. |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
oooooo....me likes....very kewls.... MiseryDivine |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you very much for your replies. I thought I would try something out of this world, yet keep it in the real world. Know what i mean? Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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