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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Icy winds consumed my very soul, Just from the look. I stood, Frozen in the moment, Rooted to the cold earth, I became, A twisted , lifeless tree, Stripped of the leaves of love, With gnarled barren branches held upwards., I cried, In an feeble effort to summon the heavens. Then she turned away, And said goodbye. [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great imagery and descriptions here of the pain we have all felt..... Beautiful work isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Ouch, quite painful. Great work Ron.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ron, thats just how it happened, how did you know? You described this powerfully, and with strong images. All I could do was cry.. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
i think it has happened to many of us...as a poet...soulmates are we all. [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great job, goodbye is the hardest word to me... I just hate good-byes! Wonderfully written, "Icy winds consumed my very soul, Just from the look." I loved that line. Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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