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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-26 02:46 PM


Pillows of darkness, masquerading the sky
deep royal purple, and ebony hair
darkness screaming, in the silent night
billowing winds, against my window
leafy shadows, seducing the moonlight
trembling, my lonely heart pounds
passion and lust, growing deep within
embracing the darkness, embracing the night



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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DJLI
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1 posted 2000-10-26 05:51 PM


wonderfully written...your words paint a beautiful picture

P.L.U.R.

Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-10-26 06:04 PM


beautiful as usual, and seductive to the senses.
Victoria
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3 posted 2000-10-26 08:57 PM


Thank you DJLI and Ron..i enjoy writing dark poetry..nice of you to visit..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


MiseryDivine
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
4 posted 2000-10-26 11:45 PM


whoa...i loved the darkness...just beautiful
MiseryDivine

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-10-27 01:37 AM


thank you miserydevine..thank you so much for reading..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2000-10-27 08:20 AM


I've finally run out of words so I'll just Ditto what the others have already said!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2000-10-27 08:35 AM


Deliciously dark..I feel like this a lot. Great feeling to this.
Sandra

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