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Bed of ICE |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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years went by, and I never noticed the agony of my now frozen tears that destroyed my faith in your bed of warmth, I so wanted to embrace I laid in this bed of ~ICE~ and called it my "honor", as your wife many nights, I would spend all alone It would chill me to the bone I could not escape the cold reality that you were the one married to me? line upon line, the story would unfold to you, my soul, had been sold so I lay here, in this frigid dark vault, our bedroom my soul completely filled, with your ~ICY~ gloom I cannot move this frozen corpse I have become or change this union into truly becoming one I dreamt of red hot, steamy nights of passion but all they did, was turn to gray as ashen I seductively came to you, so many times with loving you, my only heinous crime only to hear loud echoes of snores to you I was, I guess, merely a bore? [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Adultry is a sin but to me turning your back on a spouse like you described is more of a sin..heartfelt illusion.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Brrr, very cold..I hope you find the warmth you deserve, and soon! Take care. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel a certain sadness for you that you have tried so hard and seemed to fail so miserable in your attempts to give and receive love...something or somebody needs to wake that snoring man up to smell the roses...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Someone turn up the heat in here please??  Cold work at it's finest hon, they've lost you've had a learning experience, try to look at it that way. *hugs* Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Victoria.....so well put! I have never looked at it from that angle, but you are correct. Thank you for the insight! Catalinamoon......Thanks for throwing me a blanket!! Having others just say something nice adds so much warmth doesn't it! jmlee12345....You hit the nail on the head! What more can I say, as you see it just the way it is. Thanks! Isis....You always give such words of wisdom and encouragement in what you say! Thank you for the hug too! |
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