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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Ok...this is one of my anti-suicidal poems...one of few...so please don't take it off... Show me the way to die Take some pills I’ll get ill Overdose Is that the way out? Slit my wrists Go into the abyss Bleed Was there any doubt? Jump off a building I am willing Fall Is that how I’ll end it all? Take a gun Then I’ll be done Shot What problem did it solve? Get some rope I cannot cope Hang Is that the way I’ll die? Maybe I’ll live Do I have more to give? Life Will I still cry? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well I won't take it off hon. It shows clear enough that no form of suicide is the answer. Good work and good thinking  Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey,...this is a great poem...i love the message...MiseryDivine |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
good message. why sacrifice your life, there may be wonderful things ahead, besides its a selfish act. think of the impact it has on those that love you. who knows, by suicide, you may have let someone else die in the future, because it may be you that would have saved them. sort of like...it's a wonderful life. and it usually is. nice turn around at the end. |
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