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For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 2000-10-24 03:52 AM


And here I go again..
Lost again within..
this endless cycle,
this chantless tune..
my existence as dynamic as the life of the moon

Every night different from the last..
Yet every night repeated from the past..
Perhaps too much drink..
perhaps too much smoke..
Perhaps too much....

The shadows..we talk..
the beckon me to ask..
Perhap too little contact..
perhaps too little in touch
Perhaps too little...

Oh, what a stroke,
gutted from the length..
of things I am...not much to lose there
Of things I am not..to much to start now..
Too little too much...

I envisioned Grand designs
I dreampt of perfect choas..
I loved without restraint
I was gutted along my length
Too little too much...the scar runs deep

© Copyright 2000 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-10-24 02:18 PM


Perfect poem for Dark Passions. It feels desperate and confused. (or was that just me?) Anyway, I can relate.
Take care.
Sandra

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-10-24 07:36 PM


Hi For Never welcome home *hugs*   I see your journey lately has been emotional and hazardous???  I'm sorry hon.  Well purge away here in Dark a little soul cleanse can only help.  
Great descriptions and work as always...
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
3 posted 2000-10-24 08:45 PM


"I loved without restraint
I was gutted along my length
Too little too much...the scar runs deep"

These three lines say it all.  Amazing writing!


Take me as I am or watch me as I go

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