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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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We sat on the steps Warm sun Beating down. Not a word was spoken You just put your hand In mine. Your tears washed away The dirt on my palm Your lips brushed The beating vein. You put my hand Down. And walked away. ~ Tara ~ 13th September 2000 "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
So very sad, but wonderfully written. "The Sun is gone, but I have a Light" K.C. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Wow.. such sadness in so few words.. It's beautiful! Crakker |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tara...you do so well with these type poems. You say so much without saying much. Excellent. Hardrock |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
The strength of these few images is excellent... damn good poem here...  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Great poem, so short and the feeling of sadness is so sharp... Wonderfully written, take care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
Tara, no words indeed..for a long time. this one is blunt, and hurtful, but evocative and powerful. its a poem of endings, i think. thanks for returning josh |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tara, this is very meaningful to me, and I'm sorry if you have been going through a goodbye like this. Very strong poem. Sandra |
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