To Victoria (read her "Cobwebs and Tears)

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Dark Poetry #2

To Victoria (read her "Cobwebs and Tears)

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 2000-10-22 04:53 PM

I can sweep away your cobwebs,
I can wipe away your tears.
But I can’t sweep away your loneliness,
I can’t wipe away your fears.

I can’t reach inside of you,
And heal your broken heart.
I can’t put things back together,
When they’re broken all apart.

But I can be here for you,
When you cry out in the night.
And I can try to hold you,
Until the morning light.

I can wrap my arms around you,
And let you feel my love.
And when I touch your sleeping face,
It won’t be with leather glove.

I’ve strength enough for both of us,
But I’ll give you time to grieve.
Until you find your love again,
With someone who won’t leave.

So hang on tight, my darling,
Hide yourself in me.
I’ll be waiting inside your computer,
At Netpoets dot com DP.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-10-22 07:35 PM

Well I am so flattered..so sweet of you to write this in response to my poem Hardrock..thank you so much ..*peeking thru the cobwebs *haa...

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-10-22 09:17 PM

Awesome poem..beautiful words..
S

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-10-23 08:33 AM

Tremendous!

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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