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Unbareable brakeage |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
How can he not see? Not see what lays in front of him A warm loving girl Who only wants to love him Her dreams, her hopes, her longings, and her world, they all revolve around him It's hard for him, she knows But still she waits Through long days and even longer nights She does not give up She continues to fight between her head and her heart Her head saying to stop the love any way she can, her heart saying to hold on to the hope Day to day she suffers, becoming weaker, because of love Blessed Be Those Who Reads My Writing |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I know that all too well...guys are blind (well, most are...) you should just try to move on if he obviously doesn't like you. Dark Star |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Been there, still there, though not waiting anymore, cause he kicked me down the stairs and broke my heart. But wow, do I know the feeling. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I really like this one Danielle... you've written it so well  Love can be a right pain sometimes! Take care "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
D...one-sided love is never good. It just won't work....and you can't make it work. An oft-told tale here....and you did it so well. Very nice poem. Hardrock |
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