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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
The kiss of death has touched my soul He kissed me and I fell in live Everything changed that day, we were no longer "just friends" The relationship had so much potential Yet he through it all away He kissed me with a burning passion and I kissed back with love Love was not what he wanted, he only longed for fun The love I had in me for him slowly started to fade and die Soon I despised him, I could hardly even bare to look at him And that is when he turned to me and said, " I love you" |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Hmmm...so he did love you and it just didn't seem like it? did you take him seriously when he said he loved you? I'm confused...it was a good poem though.. Dark Star |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I know just how you feel. guys are too confusing some times. Great writing  "The Sun is gone, but I have a Light" K.C. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Too bad you didn't both fall in Love at the same time...looks like the timing was off a little bit...so now do you fall back in Love or is this the end...or is that another poem...James |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
love is strange like that... this is a great idea to work with. nice job. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whetever, you've beaten them. |
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