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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-18 10:04 PM



Sitting here in this great hall
I commence to defend love
Show to the devil that love is above all
I let you enter and listen in
If you promise to be still and keen,

Devil: Love is a game of fools,
I: Why? Because it does not have a set of rules,

Devil: Love brings misery to ones soul,
I: It soothes the heart that once was cold,

Devil: Love fills one’s mind with unreachable hope,
I: But it does not put fear causing someone to elope,

Devil: Love produces such madness,
I: But without love one is filled with such sadness,

Devil: Love puts one in a mess,
I: However it does not leave one to guess.

Devil: Without love world would do just fine,
I: Have you bring drinking a little too much wine?

I: A life is nurture with the love as its real meaning,
Devil: Over the years that life requires continuous healing,

I: A risk is taken when love is sought after,
Devil: It seems to me love is a bit of rafter (teaser),

I: I for one may choose love over and over,
Devil: You sound like a dog by the name called rover,

I: Loyal to love is the ultimate satisfaction,
Devil: Well you will not have my ratification,

I: Pleasure is not described without love being stated,
Devil: but it does not come empty, always fully bated

So my friends you see the argument still exist,
If you wish to stay be still as the summers eve,
Watch me in action as I take on the devil,
Cease the talk amongst each other avoiding cavil,
As I teach the devil the notion of love,
Wishing my soul flying like a free dove.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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1 posted 2000-10-18 11:39 PM


Wow, this is so cool! I have to agree with the devil on a lot of his points here, though yours are the ones I wish to believe.
Very sad lately..
I hope true love is a reality, somewhere in time.
Sandra

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2 posted 2000-10-19 10:44 AM


*SiGh* This is among the greatest piece i ever come across so far  
On the matter of the devil and you i think this one debate that would never find an ending no matter how much either one defend your points   co'z love sucks while it also gives you a meaning of life at the same time .... believe me i know this well dearie  

excellent piece anyways  

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

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3 posted 2000-10-20 12:48 PM


Thank you for your comments. Catalinamoon, I am the devil, so you are agreeing with me. LOL. Thank you very much CrEaTuRe for your comments. You are right. The argument will never be settled.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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