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Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-10-20 07:35 AM


BWA, while Vampire Poetry of itself is not at all a problem, the graphic, violent content in your poem is inappropriate under Passion's Guidelines. It is for that reason that your poem has been removed.

Severn


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With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.  




[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 10-20-2000).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-10-20 09:19 AM


Broken_Winged_Angel,
lol at the last line. I loved the way you juxtaposed the two things dead and sickly.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
2 posted 2000-10-20 09:29 AM


Nice piece of work my friend   i would love to see more of it too  
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-10-20 12:52 PM


Great story. The way I am feeling, I think I will seek them out, can't feel any worse.  LOL  May as well feed someone..
Catalinamoon

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