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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i was hoping that you were here to tell me that i go about it all wrong because i know i do. i was hoping that you would push me into the new i wish that you could make silence dance and that you would help me to laugh as we both died i wish that you were more than my loathing more than my past more than neon green and catchy slogans i wish that you were real or that you weren't that i could touch you or know there was nothing to touch instead of flailing my arms in the dark i was hoping that you would tell me that i go about this all wrong because i know i do i was hoping that you could push me into the new. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jannel, This is a nice circular rhyme. It so easily goes back to the beginning and starts again. Well done. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, this is great! And I truly relate, especially to the following: i wish that you were real or that you weren't that i could touch you or know there was nothing to touch instead of flailing my arms in the dark Take care Catalinamoon |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this has several inspirations, but the main one is a bunch of posters around campus that say "do you agree with andy?" they popped up last week, and everyone was theorizing as to what andy was all about. as it turned out, they were from a religious organization on campus, and i was slightly disappointed that all of my fantasies about andy had been disproven. so this is my ode to andy. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul -the eels |
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