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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Your song plays on, still the meaning eludes me. The broken metallic echos linger misconstrued to me. I stand a stolid feature in what used to be our gift. The vast, and darkend valley that has now become our rift. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hhmmmmm A lot fo possibilities here... but again, today, somethign I think many know. Christopher |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i really enjoyed this. especially the broken metallic echoes. that was a very nice line. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul -the eels |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I like this poem....The more I read it, the more I feel the point eludes me!! You know me.... Thanx!! Click |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh boy, I get it all too well. Awesome, short and pointed. Love this. And thanks for the support earlier, as well. Catalinamoon / Sandra |
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