Dark Poetry #2 |
Blood and Tears |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Would you like some blood to drink, now that you're a vampire? Opened all my veins of love threw me in the fire. Drops of passion spill to earth, heart ripped out so cruely. Now I lay in tears of blood this is how you use me. Feel my blood all over you, remains of your last kiss. Hot blood left with no use now, go on and take the rest... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
it's been a long time since i've been in here and i'm sorry for all i have missed. i see alot of people have left this place and new people have came that's always good. this is a great piece as i remember all your work is. i'm going to be in here alot more than i have. so this is one friend you've got back. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Wow! Poweful piece! I too have been gone awhile. It's very good to be back, and see that you and others are still here writing. Take Care! ~Sash~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
AAAwwww.... loved the last stanza... Great piece, loved it! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sandra,...*sigh*. Very powerful indeed. Very. I'm right here....Please take care. *Peace. |
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