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My Little Two-Faced Whore
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My Little Two-Faced Whore |
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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
My Little Two-Faced Whore I know where you keep all your thoughts I know why you talk and talk I know why you fear the outside It's just a rainy day in here You're never near cause of your fears Behind a crystal ball you like to believe That all the colors come from the trees But your naivety is so pretty Your anger is so appreciated Even though it's much animated And come to the door My little two faced whore Dream of me some more My little two faced whore It's not hard to understand How you attract every man Truth is beauty and beauty is truth But truth was never meant To help beauty sin Your fake grin never wins Another past is realized With multi-personal colored eyes You've come to despise what you do And you should But quitting was never good It's understood money is the root And come to the door My little two faced whore Dream of me some more My little two faced whore |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Len, this is different. Does he want her or not? Interesting writing style. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Indulge me for a second here - I read a lot into this piece - perhaps having been in a similar place myself at one time. I see this being a weird mix - the love/hate feelings that we always have such a hard tiem justifying with each other. On one hand, you love her - on the other... two-faced. It's a difficult boat to be in and I think to "cope" requires more than just strength, it requires persistance and acceptance. If this is from your life, peace... I know how difficult it can be. Christopher |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i found this to be incredibly intriguing. it deserves music to go with it. i liked it for many reasons that i am unsure of. can you love one face of someone, and despise another? certainly. much love. jann elizabeth Don't take any wooden nickels When you sell your soul -the eels |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'd also like to her this to music. May be haunting. Not sure. I liked this. Joy |
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