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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
With nose pressed to the window glass, I look out as the world rolls past. I watch the rain, course down the pane, And see myself at last. Click |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This is cool. You should expand on it.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Enjoying your thoughts here. This is such a neat little poem. Sort of makes ya sit back and think you know? Very cool! Take care of yourself. *Peace. |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Click~~Few words. but draws me to the window right along with You. Nice.... ~Sash~ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I really like this one a lot! I like your imagery, and its combination with a very short and to-the-point poem. The style of this one is als quite good. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Cool! Besides the excellent rhythm, the imagery this gave me...in so few words...is great. I got an idea of a small child combined with an adult... great read.  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wonderful wonderful wonderful poem, click. i saw myself in the same view, rain tracks brandin my cheeks like the ones of tears. this is very good!! makes one think... kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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