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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
The noise of reality grates when she steps towards the gate life drives by on a six-lane highway never stopping to let her in just slowing for a look then speeding away to places that shes never been Her eyes crawl round to peak through the gap but her face cant face whats peaking back a world devoid of hope where fate broadcasts through a daytime soap where gladness is madness and sadness despair thats when she needs him badly thats when hes not there She retreats from the gate in sorrow someday she'll try again but not tomorrow. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Cool metaphors - The noise of reality grates Ain't that the truth! Christopher |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
josh i would go into detail about why i like this poem and what i like about it. but at this very moment i am feeling quite out of strength...just wanted you to know i like it a whole lot...(i wrote you a little something after what you posted in my last poem). shira |
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