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at dawn i die |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
at dawn i die ill lie beneath the huge sky bearing down on me letting it flatten me i won't have to drown in my tears and i won't have to choke on my fears they'll seep out of me like blood flowing towards the horizon. [This message has been edited by silentsky (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Very cool poem...I liked it... Dark Star |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
Simply profound, I felt you bending dimensions with this one. |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
shira this poem faithfully reflects your talent to feel, and write. if you dont mind, i would like to choose this interpretation: the sky can be a warm blanket, and the tears can be tears of joy. i know its a stretch. josh |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ouch - sounds painful!  |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
dear dear josh i wish youre interpretation was a relection of my feelings when writing it. instead the sky is the burdens of my mind and the tears are of relief...i suppose. or maybe just pain. shira |
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