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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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A tear rolls down a cheek Escaping, falling away You've really lost it babe Yeah, I hear you shouting With your silence Mouth open, nothin' comin' out Yeah, babe Ain't it a cryin' shame... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It sure is a shame. A little touch of happiness would be nice, wouldn't it? I liked it, you summed up the feeling well. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wow Tara.....so many times I have been on both sides of this. Crying or seeing another cry.....either way, it still hurts. You just keep touching my soul.....Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Shouting with silence, I think I did a poem like this not to far back. It is a shame when it comes to that, words that need to be spoken never come. Ears that need to hear them never listen. Hearts never mend. World fall apart. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
love the work you state the feeling very well. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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