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Have a little Seceret |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I have a little secret It's only mine you know If I tell you my secret You must be as special as a rose I have a secret I hold it close Not letting very many people see That if I let the world in on my secret I'll be loosing a part of me Here is my secret I'll hold it as a note in the palm of my hand Read it as I look away I hope you'll understand! I don't have one secret in particular I want to hide, but I have many. Secrets are good things! Well, most are! I like the idea of your own little secret that nobody else knows about. I'm guessing everyone has 'em! Joy [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh,...SpitFire here has got a few secrets. haha. I love this. I especially like the part where the speaker says... Here is my secret I'll hold it as a note in the palm of my hand Read it as I look away I hope you'll understand!.... ~I love that...I can see it taking place. Looking away,....with an open hand. Cool post. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Depends on the secret, some secrets can never be told!!  Good work...  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Joy....I really liked the interplay between the one with the secret and the one being allowed to share......and the implied bond being formed. I got so much out of this.....simply beautiful. Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Joy you have been gone?? it's great to have you back. yes I have a few, some I could tell you some if I did I'd have to kill you. hahaha love your work kid. and stay a while. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i find this funny cause i have things from my past that no one knows about and can never know. Here is my secret. LOL great poem love the idea cause its different. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'm glad you enjoyed this, but I'm a little surprised this got any replies because after I wrote it I found it a little less than perfect, a little more than completley horrid. With a wink and a smile,  Joy < !signature--> Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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