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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-08 07:08 PM


Eerie shadows in the wind

haunting in the breeze

the night..in disguise

creeping in black chemise

Shadows dance until morning

then dance with the sun

while thunder and lightning

play in the rain..like a drum

Grey wolves howl at the moon

and the night stalks again

whispers in the darkness

are voices of legends when..

Bloodshot eyes scope the night

behind moonlight mask..they embark

but whose eyes are they

in the Eeriness of the dark?



Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

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1 posted 2000-10-09 01:28 AM


Great piece. I enjoyed it.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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2 posted 2000-10-09 03:07 PM


thank you Xeonox and for reading.. glad you enjoyed
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3 posted 2000-10-09 07:57 PM


Another great poem!  This is my favorite so far..Write on!..........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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4 posted 2000-10-09 10:28 PM


Thank you Beth..ill keep trying ha ha..glad you enjoyed the poem..
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5 posted 2000-10-09 11:30 PM


Victoria...awesome imagery in this, loved the read.

K


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6 posted 2000-10-10 12:06 PM


thank you severn..and for taking time to peek in..
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