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The Vicious Cycle Spins....
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The Vicious Cycle Spins.... |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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I am consumed by your fire Weakened by just your glance In your arms my fears subside We indulge in momentary romance There is no force of nature That can keep our bodies apart They mold together so perfectly In that moment I have your heart Inside this world of pleasure Everything feels so right Goodbye has lost its meaning As two lovers share the night So many words left unspoken The night turns into day The vicious cycle begins again As I watch you walk away Trapped inside this blissful hell Do you think it should really end? Come over to my house… So we can talk about it again. [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Strangly enough, I can truly relate to this piece  The cycle it is indeed. I frequently wonder if it ever stops, or just keeps going. Thank you for submitting this...I'm glad I stopped to read it. Great work!!!!Jeremy "those little slices of death, how I loathe them" Edgar Allen Poe sorry forgot to add my signature lmao [This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Another good poem from a talented writer. I enjoyed this piece.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
Allow the feather to spiral from the heavens, going down down down let the wind lift it up and spin it around around around. I too just got out of a loving relationship that turned sour, I think about it every hour. Do be so quick to rebound, thats when things don't go round and round. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but how do we get out? I know. . .good question. . . great poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
"Trapped inside this blissful hell" I dig that! Cool, Chris |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
There is just somthing about that flame, even when you know, around you go again! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Lady Lost, Boy did you hit home with this one. I don't think there is a single line that didn't come right out of my heart too! This part works for me: I am consumed by your fire Weakened by just your glance In your arms my fears subside We indulge in momentary romance The only thing is that the fear doesn't subside for me it's more like worries! Boy is there a lot of momentary romance in this world. Great poem. Vince "Explosions, are just the thoughts of a creative person." - Boardman |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written..loved it.. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Wow! This is so beautiful, sad and true. Why does this cycle always seem to happen? So true. So sad. So many words left unspoken The night turns into day The vicious cycle begins again As I watch you walk away Too true. Too sad. forever we spin. Love is the law, Love under will. |
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