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Dark Poetry #2

it's bitter end

Trisha4_u
Junior Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 28

0 posted 2000-10-12 12:01 PM

when someone makes a mistake, hurting another...the damage is done.
then someone ask forgiveness, expressing true sorrow...
with hopes the healing has begun.
when someone holds onto the bitterness... then uses it like a knife.
then someone asks why... another holds his lips tight.
when... time doesn't hear the plea's... in true light.
then the darkness has to come to its bitter end.
when one walks away from a true friend.

trisha4u/pjmc 10-11-00

[This message has been edited by Trisha4_u (edited 10-12-2000).]

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

1 posted 2000-10-12 02:33 PM

It is sad when friends give up and just let it end. Touching peace this is.

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

2 posted 2000-10-12 05:55 PM

Trish, great work, short and to the point. Great for guys like me who hate to read

But you know my trials. I've had friends sleep with my girlfriends, betray my trust, etc...sometimes a little pinned up anger and frustration makes you more aware the next time you "feel something going array". But I'm learning

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Trisha4_u
Junior Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 28

3 posted 2000-10-12 09:31 PM

Jeremy and jlocke... Thank you i am still very new at this. It is a way of releasing the pain one feels.
Jeremy... Thank you my sweet friend for you truly inspire me to try.

Trisha

[This message has been edited by Trisha4_u (edited 10-12-2000).]

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