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Dark Poetry #2

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The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-10-02 12:10 PM

       maybe we grow tired           of

          b         o ring  ourselves to tears

whhen can  we

stop wishing       just listen
       to hear    a balance like this

is proof enough   we have imperfect fears

    stop spinning   your ta i  ls

    aaround   h  ere

my spies tell the same

   they speak in obsession   im in love with the

        w  ords

wont someone bring the kids back home

    alive

isnt someone going to bring the kids home
       a l i ve

im sorry i wasnt there   so sorry i wasnt there

i had some place to be

  alone and swallowed perfect
   The Grea a t   aMer i can  dream

wiith this room for once   c h a s ing me

"you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings
you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything"

"so impressed with

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-10-02 06:29 AM

Wow Jackal,
this was different and powerful. Good stuff.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

2 posted 2000-10-02 10:02 AM

really incredible...
sad.
falling.
but powerful.
everything about it amazes me.
i really loved it.
shira

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-10-02 04:23 PM

liked this. have you ever read a lot of cummings? i love word art in poetry.

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