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Dark Poetry #2

alive again

silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-10-01 04:00 PM

i'm
alive again
fresh feeling in my every glance
bewilderedly blinking at myself
a tear travelling slowly softly down my cheek
towards
my trembling lip.

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

1 posted 2000-10-01 08:01 PM

This is a great post. One of those abstract pieces that can be perceived in many ways. I can realte to being "alive again" in my own way..I am happy that you have learned, too. ..........beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

2 posted 2000-10-02 12:51 PM

such a lovely lttle poem.
i hope to read more of your works .
truly inspired.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-10-02 06:14 AM

Silentsky,
you certainly are alive, even if life means pain.
be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

4 posted 2000-10-02 04:16 PM

lovely. this completely describes a night i had recently, and i absolutely adore it.

jann elizabeth

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